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Writing

Essays are not just about good writing, they are about showing who you are beyond your GPA and test scores. Whether it’s a school-specific supplemental or your personal Common App essay, your essays are about sharing your voice, story, and help you stand out against the thousands of other applicants.

The Main Essay

The main essay on Common App, also known as your personal statement, is a very important part of your application. It is your chance to show colleges who you are beyond just your grades and test score. You will choose one of seven prompts and write a response up to 650 words. This essay should tell a story or reflect on an experience that shaped you or shows personal growth. Use your authentic voice and try to be specific rather than listing achievements.

Caitlin's

Our Main Essays

Julia's

   “Do I get to ride Dolly today?” Kendall asked, her face lighting up with joy and anticipation as she leaned against the arena fence, looking for her favorite little brown horse. It was her fourth summer at Wings of Eagles Ranch, and as always, she was the most excited for the horseback riding sessions. Kendall, a 24-year-old with Down syndrome, had a deep love for anything involving horses, and as her sidewalker during these sessions, it was my job to guide her, though it was her joy and confidence that truly led the way.

   Kendall’s excitement perfectly reflects what Wings of Eagles strives to achieve – serving as a place where kids and young adults with disabilities, like Kendall, can pursue their joys and passions in a place that acknowledges and embraces their needs. Through activities like arts and crafts, horseback riding, ropes courses, and games, the camp’s mission is to empower its campers with independence, confidence, and a sense of belonging.

   Before my first day as a camp counselor, I wasn’t quite sure what to expect. I wasn’t used to working with kids with disabilities, and I wondered if I would be able to connect with someone whose world seemed so different from mine. But as I watched Kendall guide Dolly so confidently and joyfully through the arena, with no other care in the world, I realized that our connection was built not on our differences, but on our shared moments of joy. 

During my time at Wings of Eagles Ranch, my role as a camp counselor and sidewalker for Kendall involved more than just ensuring her safety. It was also about being there for every excited cheer and helping her navigate the camp. As I guided Kendall through each activity my spirits were lifted; Kendall’s happiness was infectious, putting a smile on the faces of everyone around her. 

   One of Kendall’s greatest strengths was easily her enthusiasm. Her love for activities at camp allowed her to approach each event with confidence. However, she sometimes faced challenges when it came to maintaining focus in longer activities, occasionally struggling to stay engaged in more complex activities. Despite these difficulties, Kendall showed incredible resilience. One of the memorable moments I was able to witness was when she successfully guided Dolly through a more challenging course, and her beaming smile served as a sense of accomplishment. She was an inspiration to me! 

   Through my time at Wings of Eagles Ranch, I learned important lessons about empathy, adaptability, and personalized support. In working closely with Kendall, I discovered how understanding and addressing the needs of others can impact their ability to succeed and thrive, especially amid challenges. This experience changed my perspective on my life and the lives of others, teaching me to better appreciate the significance of patience, flexibility, and recognition of each person’s strengths and struggles. Every person deserves understanding and support.

   Looking forward, I will actively seek opportunities to support others, regardless of their challenges. Whether it be through involving myself in campus activities, volunteer work, or other community efforts, I am committed to promoting inclusivity and understanding for all people. My goal is to help create environments where everyone feels valued and supported, just as I aimed to do for Kendall at camp.

    There’s a special kind of excitement that comes with opening a blind bag, a small sack containing a surprise. As I rip through the plastic, my heart races with anticipation, eager to find out what’s inside. While it may seem childlike and silly, this simple activity has taught me an important lesson: to appreciate the little things in life and embrace surprises. Whether I’m opening blind bags, volunteering with animals, or navigating the routines of daily life, I’ve realized that some of the best experiences come when you stay open to surprises and seek excitement in the face of monotonous daily routines.

     Daily life sometimes feels like an endless loop. I go to school, do homework, sleep: repeat. It’s easy to lose motivation when every day feels the same. That’s where blind bags come in. The thrill of opening one brings excitement into my daily routine. Whenever I go to the store, I end up grabbing a new one. I scan the back of the packaging to predict what I think will be inside, and then I tear open the wrapping to reveal my prize. In most cases, it’s some cheap plastic toy or card, but for me, it’s not about the object inside; it’s about the rush I get from revealing it. These small surprises break the dull cycle of everyday life and remind me that joy can be found in the littlest things.

    This outlook extends beyond blind bags and into my volunteer work at the Humane Society. I care for dogs and cats, many of them arriving scared or injured. While it’s heartbreaking for me to see them in pain, I try not to focus on their suffering. Instead, I strive to offer them comfort, because just like opening a blind bag, the gift of seeing the animals’ progress every day brings me the same rush of joy. Moments like an anxious dog accepting affection or an introverted cat letting me play with them may seem small, but through savoring these small victories, I’m reminded that the most meaningful prizes come from the littlest things.

    One memory that stands out to me is meeting a dog named Fruitbat. He was a mutt with pointy ears who cowered in the corner of his enclosure, terrified of everyone. While other volunteers wanted to engage with the more excited dogs, I took the time to take Fruitbat out for walks, and as we strolled side by side, I felt a newfound sense of hope. Despite his initial fear, it didn’t take long before Fruitbat was running around and rolling in the grass like it was his first time outside. Before I left for the day, I found a bat stuffed animal in the storage closet and brought it to him. Waiting to see if he would emerge from his corner to accept my gift felt like opening a blind bag. I didn’t know whether the outcome would be good or bad, but I was ready to embrace it either way. Although he still seemed scared, he accepted the gift, and the joy I felt watching a once terrified dog open up to me and accept my present was indescribable. It’s moments like these that I realize the smallest gestures can have profound impacts.

    Looking for joy in unexpected places has helped me build resilience in all areas of my life. Whether I’m studying for a challenging test or facing a difficult decision, I approach each situation with optimism. Life, like a blind bag, doesn’t always deliver what you’re hoping for, but if you don’t appreciate them, those moments will pass you by. I’ve learned that embracing surprises, good and bad, can lead me to be a more accepting and adaptable person, and in a world that seems to drag me along, the most rewarding moments come when least expected.

Supplementals

In addition to the personal statement, most colleges also require supplemental essays that are specific to their school. These can range from short, 150 word answers, to longer essays for 300-500 words. Examples include: “Why this school?, How will you contribute to our campus? Describe a community you are a part of.” These supplementals are your chance to show if you have researched the school and understand its values, programs, or culture. Write each response specific to the school, and avoid copying and pasting the same answer for every school. 

Caitlin's

Supplemental Examples

Julia's

Reflect on your identity, including your background and experiences, and how you envision your identity contributing to the UNCW community.

 

From a young age, I’ve been drawn to helping others, always wanting to perform small acts of kindness. As a member of my church’s youth group in high school, I found that my compassion for others could have a bigger impact. One Sunday, my church’s youth group leader announced a volunteer opportunity at a nearby homeless shelter, and I immediately knew I wanted to participate. First, we cooked large amounts of food, and then we moved to the night shelter, where we served meals directly to the guests. This work was more than just standing behind a counter providing food; it involved creating meaningful connections with others. The shelter’s philosophy was not centered around lecturing to the guests, but simply meeting people where they were. If someone wanted to chat, we would be there for a conversation. If they wanted to pass in and out quickly, we respected that. It allowed us to help them feel seen and heard without any pressure. Over time, as I returned on multiple occasions, I grew much more comfortable and was able to realize how much simply being present with someone, listening to what they had to say, or even just offering them a smile made a difference. I will continue to be a compassionate person at UNCW, where I plan to volunteer with the Hawk’s Harvest UNCW Food Pantry and Wings Up for Wilmington because I know that these acts of kindness, large or small, will create a strong and supportive community in Wilmington.

Explain, in detail, an experience you've had in the past 3 to 4 years related to your first-choice major. This can be an experience from an extracurricular activity, in a class you’ve taken, or through something else.*

   

    An experience I’ve had recently related to my first-choice major, Animal Sciences, is assisting my mom with her dog grooming business. During my junior year, she transformed a spare room in the front of our home into a grooming salon. Since then we have had all kinds of dog breeds come in. At first, I was only allowed to clean the table or tub, but eventually, I got to do more complex tasks like nail trimming, bathing, and some fur trimming.

    The experience has been extremely rewarding, helping me learn a lot about animal behavior. One of my favorite experiences was grooming a huge Saint Bernard who was too big for the tub, so we had to take him outside to use a hose and a special fan brush for his shedding fur. I was completely covered in soap and fur by the end and needed the fan to get all the fur off me!

Explain why you selected the academic program(s) above and why you are interested in studying these at NC State. 

 

    Growing up in Kentucky, I spent countless hours sitting in my backyard watching the cows from the neighbor’s farm graze by the pond. Even after moving to a busy urban area, my connection with animals has remained strong through helping with my mom’s dog grooming business and volunteering at the Humane Society of Charlotte. This bond has inspired me to pursue Animal Sciences at NC State, with hopes of one day attending the College of Veterinary Medicine to care for the animals I’ve always loved.

    One of the biggest reasons I want to attend NC State is because of its wide array of unique opportunities for animal science majors. The variety of farms and facilities available for gaining hands-on animal experience and the many research opportunities draw me in. I would especially love to research developmental nutrition with baby piglets at the Jack Odle Laboratory. Working or researching there would be a once-in-a-lifetime experience, that would let me to engage in research that can make a real impact on animal care and nutrition. The blend of hands-on animal care and research at NC State is exactly what I’m hoping to participate in.

    Additionally, I would love to take part in NC State's study abroad program, especially the one at Harper Adams University in the UK, where I would get the opportunity to study animal behavior and physiotherapy while keeping my passion for travel alive.

Explain why you selected the academic program(s) above and why you are interested in studying these at NC State. 

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I’ve always known that I wanted to work in healthcare, and the idea of helping improve others’ quality of life fascinates me. I’m interested in how biology connects to healthcare and explains so much about the human body. Understanding the factors that keep us healthy or make us sick drives me to explore how this knowledge can be used to make a positive difference in the lives of others. NC State’s Biological Sciences program offers a thorough curriculum that will allow me to explore several fields within biology, focusing on those relevant to healthcare. The Life Sciences First Year program stands out as an opportunity to gain a broad foundation in biological sciences and provides the flexibility to explore various fields of study before choosing a certain path. I believe that this program will help me discover the specific area I am most passionate about. I’m also excited about the opportunities for undergraduate research, which will give me hands-on experience of how biological research can correlate with healthcare. Through this program, I look forward to expanding my knowledge of biology and its connection to healthcare, working with faculty and peers, and engaging in research. I believe that the diverse and well-rounded education that NC State provides will be essential for my future in healthcare. 

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